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Critique Meme [Post the Zeroth]
oboroharu, geisha
freosan wrote in hashdoctorwhorp
Thought we'd get this off to a quick start.



Critique Meme


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Always entertaining and willing to talk to people. I go into fits of glee whenever I see him on the feed. But I agree, occasionally it is difficult to follow where he is or why he's doing something.

Good characterisation and interactions, though sometimes I get a bit lost in where he is and his companions. So perhaps a summary or collection of all the posts would be useful. I like how the characters interact when they come on the feed and also when the Doctor talks to people in other RPs. I think he was the first character I talked to- as me and in character too. ^_^

Gwen_Cooper (http://twitter.com/Gwen_Cooper)

My main account in Twitter RP.

Gwen is my favorite of the Torchwood characters and generally perfectly spot-on. Just keep it up.

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I like watching Theta Sigma, but I don't like action posts on Twitter. Doesn't suit the medium. His voice is enough to get across the idea of what he's doing.

Interesting, especially for an OC. I'd suggest working on making the most dramatic events unfold more naturally. One waffle episode was fun, but it's happened too often since then and they're starting to seem forced.

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Eh, why not?

http://twitter.com/Mister_Magister

Might take you a while you get into the swing of things, but once you're on a roll then it's pretty well done. Sometimes the Master is surprisingly nice, but that can add to a sense of not knowing exactly what he's up to.

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Excellent character with an awesome personality - especially love his crush on captainjohnhart. But too much deus-ex-machina power.

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http://twitter.com/DoctorJohnSmith

(Someday may have LJ!)

You have an excellent Ten voice. Keep it up. I'd like to see this character doing more action scenes, since that's where you really shine as a Doctor.

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<3

He did his best when things weren't so plot driven, IMHO. I'm at the point where I'm ready to say "screw plot, keep it loose" due to all of the pressure it puts everything under.

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www.twitter.com/_Mitz

Always love it when his (McGregorian!) face pops up on my feed. Very nice to everyone. Might like to see him interacting with more people than just Mouse and Snooze, though?

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You're doing well. Seta's very entertaining. If you want something to work on, I'd say make it your character voice. Your ideas are very Master-like but your wording could be closer to what Simm!Master would say.

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the_big_bang

Fantastic, imaginative, in-character but more... grown up, which is good and proper. Like most of the RP, the only problem is the huge absences! But they make it all the more exciting when you pop up.

_Snooze

_Master, of course. Indeed. Hm.

The Master is my favourite ever the end.

Jenny__Smith.

I like her adventures and I'm glad her character's evolving. I hope she doesn't go back to whining and fighting. She's got enormous potential and while I actually loathe Jenny from the show, Jenny__Smith made me really like her. Good regeneration, very unexpected.

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Sigma_Theta (http://twitter.com/Sigma_Theta)

Not enough screen time! I love him and wish I'd see more of him. I really wonder how he's going to react to Blue finalluy being disconnected from the TARDIS...

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@Little_Roma (and of course her futureself, @RomaEixap)

I absolutely adore her. She's hilarious, a very very original char and well played. Hard to play a 7 year old in game but managed well. Like her interaction with the Doctor.

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